雅思考生寫作的幾個(gè)易錯(cuò)失分點(diǎn)分析培訓(xùn)
在準(zhǔn)備雅思寫作的時(shí)候,大家可能都是全力以赴的,積累提高不斷完善,考試的時(shí)候也覺(jué)得沒(méi)有什么大問(wèn)題,可是出來(lái)的成績(jī)卻不那么令人滿意。這是為什么呢?今天就來(lái)和大家說(shuō)說(shuō)雅思考生寫作的幾個(gè)易錯(cuò)的失分點(diǎn),你有沒(méi)有這樣的問(wèn)題呢?
1.
(X) Driving makes us lazy…on the other hand it also affects the environment.
(V) Driving makes us lazy…on the other hand though, it is an easy way to get around the city.?
我們?cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候很經(jīng)常會(huì)用到on the one hand…on the other hand,但是就是這樣一個(gè)小詞組,我們也可能會(huì)用錯(cuò)。
On the other hand在第一句中被用來(lái)支持我們的論點(diǎn),但是這樣一個(gè)詞組只適用于提出相反觀點(diǎn),而不能用于支持你的論點(diǎn)。
2.
(X) There was a dramatically increase
(V) There was a dramatic increase?
注意我們?cè)赥ask1中描述變化的時(shí)候應(yīng)該使用形容詞+名詞,比如說(shuō)dramatic increase,或者是動(dòng)詞+副詞,比如it increased dramatically,這種描述的小細(xì)節(jié)一定要多多注意。
3.
(X) …is an important reason for this. Besides, people also…
(V) …is an important reason for this. Besides this/ In addition, people also…
這句話猛一看可能覺(jué)得好像沒(méi)有什么錯(cuò)誤呀?但是我們需要明確的是beside是一種比較口語(yǔ)的用法,相當(dāng)于anyway和regardless。
那如果在寫作中呢,我們最好用一些比較書面的表達(dá),口語(yǔ)化的表達(dá)就要少用一些。
4.
(X) If this continues, animals will extinct
(V) If this continues, animals will be/become extinct
Extinct的詞性是形容詞,所以我們?cè)谑褂玫臅r(shí)候需要搭配are/will be /have become這些來(lái)使用。
5.
(X) Nowaday, many people are….
(V) Nowadays, many people are….?
這就是一個(gè)非常不容易察覺(jué)的拼寫錯(cuò)誤了,但是我們?cè)谂倪^(guò)程中還是會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很多小可愛(ài)會(huì)少一個(gè)s,或者是多加一個(gè)s,如果我們因?yàn)檫@種小問(wèn)題失分的話,其實(shí)是非常不值得啦!
我們平常在寫作文的時(shí)候一定要注意拼寫問(wèn)題,最好不出現(xiàn)因?yàn)槠磳戝e(cuò)誤丟分的情況啦!
6.
(X) 40% of 60 years old people drive cars.
(V) 40% of 60 year old people drive cars.
(V) 40% of 60 year olds drive cars.?
如果要表示某人的歲數(shù),這里的years應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
如果要用年齡來(lái)形容某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,就不需要復(fù)數(shù)形式。
如果years做名詞的復(fù)數(shù),old這時(shí)候也要加上s啦~例如60 year olds are healthier than they used to be.
其實(shí)這些問(wèn)題看起來(lái)都非常細(xì)小,但是我們?cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候確實(shí)有很多小烤鴨會(huì)犯這樣的錯(cuò)誤啦!
7.
(X) Many people in the Japan believe that….
(V) Many people in Japan believe that….
如果我們?cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候涉及到國(guó)家名稱,一般不需要加定冠詞the,如果國(guó)家是縮寫形式,這時(shí)候則需要加the,如The U.K. / The U.S.A. 等。
8.
(X) It is obviously that exercising frequently is good for your health.
(V) It is obvious that exercising frequently is good for your health.?
(It is _______ that句型中,使用形容詞是更加合適的。?
9.
(X) In this essay, I will describe about the problems and suggest some solutions.
(V) In this essay, I will describe the problems and suggest some solutions.?
這里主要的問(wèn)題是搭配錯(cuò)誤,我們會(huì)用talk about或者是describe,但一般不會(huì)使用describe about。
出現(xiàn)了這些問(wèn)題正是因?yàn)槲覀冊(cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候可能有一些自己很難察覺(jué)到的小問(wèn)題小錯(cuò)誤,但是這些小毛病正是制約我們成績(jī)的絆腳石??赐炅诉@些問(wèn)題是不是突然覺(jué)得有些內(nèi)容確實(shí)是我們平常在寫作過(guò)程中容易忽視的,所以大家要努力規(guī)避!