在職場(chǎng)中尤其在英語(yǔ)環(huán)境的職場(chǎng)中,郵件是很常用的溝通手段。工作中越來(lái)越多人面臨需要使用英文寫(xiě)郵件的時(shí)刻,如何寫(xiě)一封簡(jiǎn)介明了、穩(wěn)重流暢的商務(wù)信件?既能表達(dá)清楚自己的想法又能禮貌寒暄?今天我們就來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)怎么樣才能拯救你的英文郵件吧!

基礎(chǔ) 郵件步驟

郵件第一步:?jiǎn)柡蛘Z(yǔ)

Greeting

一般最常使用的是Dear+收信人姓名。如果是寄信給長(zhǎng)輩或領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、客戶,加上稱(chēng)謂會(huì)比較正式,平級(jí)同事或合作伙伴直接寫(xiě)名字即可。

當(dāng)遇到收信人不確定的時(shí)候,比如轉(zhuǎn)寄給某項(xiàng)目的相關(guān)人員,可以用

To whom it mayconcern,(敬啟者:)

Dear Sir or Madam,

格式需注意的是,所有g(shù)reeting后面要加逗號(hào),然后空一行開(kāi)始信件正文。

郵件第二步:告知目的

Purpose

在詳細(xì)表述前,一般需要一句提綱挈領(lǐng)的話告知郵件重點(diǎn)。

I am writing to inquire …

寫(xiě)信來(lái)詢問(wèn)有關(guān) …

I am writing inreference to …

這封信是關(guān)于 …

回信的開(kāi)頭可以說(shuō)

Thank you for reaching out to us regarding …

感謝您聯(lián)絡(luò)我們 …

in reference to 和 regarding 是“有關(guān)”“關(guān)于”的意思。行文中使用會(huì)比較正式,我們熟悉的about比較口語(yǔ)化,郵件中最好不要用。對(duì)比感受一下:

口語(yǔ):I’m talking about the meeting scheduled for next week.

正式:I am writing inreference to the meeting scheduled for next week.

正式:I am writing to you regarding the possibility of scheduling a meeting for next week.

這里in reference to與regarding的一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)不同在于,inreference to用于已經(jīng)跟對(duì)方提到過(guò)的事而regarding的用法比較廣泛。

郵件第三步:正文

Content

商務(wù)郵件最重要的一點(diǎn)就是要簡(jiǎn)單明了!直入主題,不要用大長(zhǎng)句,這里不需要你展示自己的水平。

“我已將××粘帖至附件”也是經(jīng)常使用的句子。

Please review the attached documents thoroughly.

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)查閱附件。

I have attached the previously mentioned documents for your review.

上述所提文件已附在文章附件請(qǐng)查閱。

Please see the attached documents for a quotation of the requested services.

請(qǐng)參閱附件內(nèi)的服務(wù)相關(guān)報(bào)價(jià)。

郵件第四步:結(jié)尾

Closing

通常我們會(huì)客氣地說(shuō),辛苦、感謝、隨時(shí)溝通之類(lèi)的。

If you have any further questions or concerns, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

如果您有任何問(wèn)題歡迎隨時(shí)溝通。

Thank you for your time and consideration.

感謝您的寶貴時(shí)間。

I look forward to hearing from you.

盼復(fù)。

郵件第五步:結(jié)尾敬語(yǔ)&簽名檔

Sign off and signature block

這里注意,只要首字母大寫(xiě)就可以了,不用全部大寫(xiě)哈!

Sincerely,

Yours sincerely,

Respectfully,

Best regards,

在北美很少人會(huì)用 Regards,Best regards,因?yàn)椴皇呛苷?,Sincerely是最保守安全的用法!

簽名檔要跟著結(jié)尾敬語(yǔ)后面:

Sincerely,

John Smith

Sales Representative, Flooring Company

+886-900-000-000

進(jìn)階萬(wàn)金油句子

請(qǐng)別人幫忙的郵件

At your convenience, would you please send me.....

客氣一點(diǎn),最后加上Thank you for your assistance.

如果是回答對(duì)方的問(wèn)題,最后加上Hope this answers your question. Let me know if further detail/explanation would be helpful.

尋求意見(jiàn)

Our team would appreciate your insights/input on.....

Due to the short time frame for this proposal, prompt reply is greatly appreciated.

會(huì)議取消通知

I want to be mindful of your time and we don’t have any updates at this point; therefore I suggest that we cancel/reschedule today's meeting. If you disagree or need assistance, please let us know.

My apologies for the late notice, but i need to reschedule tomorrow's call. There remain a few open items we need to address, therefore i will send out a new invite once we agree upon a time.

道歉

My sincere apology for this unfortunate situation; I will address to my team immediately.

Again,pleas eaccept my most sincere apology.

文件草稿請(qǐng)求上司過(guò)目

Attached is thedrafted xx file. It is still a work in process but I would like to see ifanything immediately stood out to you as odd or worthy of follow-up.

休假或無(wú)法及時(shí)處理郵件時(shí),自動(dòng)回復(fù)內(nèi)容可以參考以下句子

Thank you for youre-mail. I will be out of the office on vacation from XXX - XXX with no access to e-mails. I apologize for any delay in response to your e-mail. I will respond to your e-mail as quickly as I can when I return to the office on Monday, April 18th. Thanks!

Thank you for youre-mail. I am out of the office in meetings on XXX and XXX with limited accessto e-mail. If you need immediate assistance, please contact me via my mobilephone. Thank you!

郵件問(wèn)好 (美國(guó)人好喜歡用hope)

周一/二可用:

I hope that yourweek is off to a great start.

Hope you had agreat weekend.

萬(wàn)能的:

Hope you’rewell/Hope you are doing well.

I hope thismessage finds you well.

TIPS 讓郵件錦上添花

連接詞的使用

快拋棄BTW吧,在一個(gè)郵件里說(shuō)起另外一件事情,你可以用in addition to/additionally/furthermore

多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)

郵件或者正式的文件里,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)會(huì)顯得更專(zhuān)業(yè)。比如需要某樣?xùn)|西,把I need xxx改成xxx is required.是不是看上去專(zhuān)業(yè)多了?

還有一個(gè)例子可以省掉主語(yǔ),把句子結(jié)構(gòu)改成Itis+動(dòng)詞,比如It is proposed that/It is confirmed that...

多注意nativespeaker的用詞

注意用他們常用的同義詞替換你常用的。比如because of 可以用due to替代;比如請(qǐng)別人核實(shí)問(wèn)題的時(shí)候不要只會(huì)用check, clarify/verify/cross verify都非常好用;比如表示在某件事之前除了before你還可以用priorto;表示在某件事之后除了用after還可以用upon(當(dāng)然用法有一些區(qū)別,舉例:Let's talk about this after you come back改成Let's talkabout this upon your return)

類(lèi)似的同義詞,如果用的時(shí)候不確定用法是否有區(qū)別,隨時(shí)查字典即可。

兩個(gè)投訴句式

There were somesmall issues which we probably need your attention to look upon.

Due to thediscrepancies in xxx issue we need your attention to resolve the problem.

看了這篇內(nèi)容,大家有什么想法呢?即使你不在外企工作,即使你也不用學(xué)習(xí)商務(wù)英語(yǔ),但是積累重要的知識(shí)也是我們學(xué)習(xí)的一部分。如果你正在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ),如果你也想提升自己的水平,那么可以來(lái)看看這篇內(nèi)容。