四六級(jí)視頻:上海新東方老師2007寫(xiě)作部分講解
新東方學(xué)友關(guān)于吳擇揚(yáng)老師作文模塊的總結(jié)
作文考試時(shí)間為30分鐘,要求寫(xiě)出不少于150個(gè)詞的短文,老吳建議是"寫(xiě)15~18句,分三段寫(xiě)",一般主張"先觀點(diǎn),后例子"。
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1.正反論證型?? 2.原因現(xiàn)象型? 3.圖表類? 4.永恒性話題
寫(xiě)作格式強(qiáng)烈建議用"齊頭式",不要有連筆詞!
現(xiàn)將老吳的四類題型摸板摘抄如下:
一.正反論證型
首段寫(xiě)一個(gè)小的現(xiàn)象介紹;
二段寫(xiě)支持觀點(diǎn);
三段寫(xiě)反對(duì)觀點(diǎn);
末段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
如:
There is a general discussion today about the issue of........................Everyone has his own view.
People who like........have their reasons.In the first place ,they think ........... In the second place , they belive ................. So ,they suggest................
Others ,however ,hold the opposite view .They maintain that ............... They point out that................... In addition,they argue that .............. Therefore ,they support ..............
Who's right ? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should ...............
二. 原因現(xiàn)象類
首段同理一個(gè)小的現(xiàn)象介紹;
2段原因分析;
末段解決問(wèn)題。
如:
Ther is a general discussion today about the issue of .....................
A number of reasons are responsible for this . In the first place , ......... In the second place , ................... In addition , ........................? So,...............................
From what have been discussed above ,we may safely draw the conclusion that ..................can be found . For one thing ,................. For another ,..................... To sum up ,there is a little doubt that further attention must be paid to the issue .
三. 圖表類
其實(shí)圖表類是原因現(xiàn)象類的另一中形式而已,所以其寫(xiě)法也就大同小異了。
如:
There is a general discussion today about the issue of ..................... As we can see from the chart ,great change have been taking place. Obviously , ......................(現(xiàn)象趨勢(shì)的描述)
Some reasons are responsible for this . To begin with , ...................... In addition ,................................ That is to say .........................
From what have been discussed above , we may safely drow the conclusion that .............................
四. 永恒性話題
在此,僅列一范文示范:
Patience is the key to success in all field of actinity . It is to be patient that enable us to build up speed and efficiency . When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort , this is the result of to be patient.
Take the study of English for example . Only practice patiently can enable us to spell words correctly and master the roles of grammar . And it is through practiently that we can become fluent in speaking and writing , there is no othere way .Anorher example can be easily found.................................................
最后將老吳上課時(shí)給我說(shuō)的精辟語(yǔ)句摘抄如下:
"考官僅看幾個(gè)點(diǎn)!相關(guān)即為替代 ,考官要看的是同一個(gè)詞的變化!"
以下錯(cuò)誤絕不能犯:1.主謂一致 2.時(shí)態(tài) 3.單復(fù)數(shù) 4.簡(jiǎn)單詞的拼寫(xiě) 5.結(jié)構(gòu)
變句模式:
1.加法
2.減法
3.被動(dòng)句
4.換言之法
5.副詞
6.插入法