【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思寫(xiě)作】政府類真題7分范文一(1/2)
來(lái)源:滬江聽(tīng)寫(xiě)酷
2014-04-10 17:28
政府類真題
【Creative?artists?should?always?be?given?the?freedom?to?express?their?ideas.?To?what?extent?do you?agree?】
第四類真題政府類真題來(lái)啦~原文來(lái)自劍四TEST 3的TASK 2.童鞋們可以回去看看考官的評(píng)語(yǔ)。
Pat老師的評(píng)語(yǔ):文中的用詞和句式明顯是要沖擊高分的。
比較遺憾的是老師雖然在書(shū)本中修改了部分語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤但是音頻中還是基本保留了考生的原文。
所以小編以音頻為準(zhǔn)提供原文。
學(xué)習(xí)愉快喵~O(∩_∩)O~?
I agree with the statement that there should be no government restriction on creative artists who express themselves in the way they do and that they must be given freedom for the same. Expression has always been the keynote in a person's life. It is the result of mere expression of our thoughts that we are able to communicate. Restrictions on how we present our thoughts is senseless.
Creative artists play a major role in our society, be it the government, old people, the youth or the children. Their work enlighten our minds, no matter if is factual or entertainment-based. It is deserving that after a day's work when we want to take some time off for ourselves, we look out for some leisure. For instance, either pleasant music or a family movie which soothes the mind. Entertainment gives us an overview of a new side of life which every individual respects. There is almost everything good in what is given to us through the media which is made up of artists.
我同意政府不應(yīng)該對(duì)那些以自己獨(dú)特方法表達(dá)自己見(jiàn)解的藝術(shù)家們?cè)谒枷肷蠌?qiáng)加限制,反而應(yīng)該給予他們足夠的自由。對(duì)自身思想的表達(dá)永遠(yuǎn)是一個(gè)人生命中的主題。正是因?yàn)槲覀儽舜吮磉_(dá)出自己的思想,才使得不同人之間可以進(jìn)行交流。而強(qiáng)加到人們身上的對(duì)表達(dá)方式的限制實(shí)在是顯得有些沒(méi)有意義。
創(chuàng)意藝術(shù)家們?cè)谏鐣?huì)中扮演著重要角色,為政府、老人、青年以及兒童都帶來(lái)了種種好處。他們的作品無(wú)論是寫(xiě)實(shí)派的還是娛樂(lè)派的,無(wú)疑都啟蒙了我們的思想。在我們辛勞一天之后,需要放縱解脫放松一下自我的時(shí)候,他們的作品是絕對(duì)值得欣賞的。例如:無(wú)論是一段輕松的音樂(lè),還是一部簡(jiǎn)單的家庭電影,都可以放松我們的頭腦。娛樂(lè)使我們能享受到那種每個(gè)人都期待的新生活的美景。藝術(shù)家們的作品通過(guò)媒體展現(xiàn)出來(lái)以后,似乎一切都是那么美。