樓主，首先根據(jù)你的原文試著修改。 Dear editor, It is a great disappoint that restrictions on plastic bags which produce little effect.As a student majoring history,I know very well about our country’s effort on the While pollution issue, there should be two things given priority to act. First and foremost,nothing would do well when we just put a ban on the use of plastic bags which we can get enormous anywhere easily.In other words,plastic bags should disappeared drastically.Therefore,merchants and individuals have to find something environmental to replace the plastic bags. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 其次，我想給出一點建議。你的文章結(jié)構(gòu) 也就是行文 應(yīng)該變一下。第一段：1表達對收效甚微的不滿 2 痛陳白色污染的危害。3提出兩三點建議（第二段的帽子，起過渡作用的） 第二段：分別陳述幾個建議 第三段：表達對未來的展望 對白色污染得到徹底遏制的希望。 最后，行文要注意邏輯性。“As a student majoring history”和“I know very well about our country’s effort on the “While pollution” issue”關(guān)系貌似不太緊密？你這個 作為一個學(xué)生，后面應(yīng)該跟的是“我知道白色污染的巨大危害”。還有，第二段，最好分點敘述，第一是。。。。第二是。。。。 當(dāng)然 我的觀點僅供參考啊.......我也是考研人 看到了就忍不住該了下 囧 還有 這是一篇關(guān)于白色污染的原文 是瘋狂英語上的 貼給你看看 White Pollution White pollution refers to plastic pollution. It is a new member of pollution family, but it grows fast. Unrecyclable plastic lunch boxes line along railroads. Plastic shopping bags dance in the wind. When leaders are busy mapping out blueprints for the future, one colour WHITE from white pollution becomes their headache. Everything in the life circle deserves its place on earth. If we continue using plastic lunch boxes, shopping bags and other unrecyclable plastic productsmwhat would happen Ⅱ One day they might bury us in an ocean of white rubbishg Then the earthmour common home, would be a dustbin. To prevent this nightmare from coming true, governments need to work closely with each other and back up their verbal commitment by actions. However, it is not enough only to ask what governments can do to get rid of white pollution, we m

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