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在滬江關(guān)注英語的滬友zyd33779410遇到了一個(gè)關(guān)于的疑惑,已有2人提出了自己的看法。
知識點(diǎn)疑惑描述
知識點(diǎn)相關(guān)講解
首先說下,無獎(jiǎng)勵(lì),無積極性。我下機(jī)前做最后一次吧。 1、你說的是個(gè)插圖吧,illustration 貌似不妥哦。只有說明書上用的多。就用picture吧,簡單化。 2、which指代story,所以不用in 3、to start with 你說的指第一幅圖吧?如果是,表達(dá)就不對。 4、so that 后接從句,所以不需要接 to+V ,直接去掉即可。 5、the green of the tree 指綠化吧,說的不對。 6、so our life is no shortage of trees 之中的is no 不對。 7、not only have the tree been felled by factories and woodmen, but also the forest been occupied by more citizen這里been 重復(fù) 8、at another hand 改為 on the other hand 9、teach sb to do 以下是改過的文章,僅供參考: Those pictures show that a little rabbit is listening to his mother telling a story which featured the beautiful forest where his ancestors lived peacefully long long time ago. But now there are only stumps standing aound him instead of the beautiful forest. From the top of this picture, the land is full of trees and leaves which give us fresh air and also slow down the speed of greenhouse effect. And more, the greenary of the forests can decorate our land and make our life more and more beautiful. to human being, wood is a kind of important material that can be used to make log cabin and turniture. so our life can't be colorful without trees. But nowadays, not only have trees been felled by factories and woodmen, but also occupied by more and more people in the course of urbanization. We must protect trees from two points. On the one hand, we must stop the deforestation at once, because the situation is getting more and more serious. On the other hand, people should teach their descendants to plant more trees to protect the whole ecosystem.
—— 純潔哥
listening改成listening to,
—— hqyzwlj
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